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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:/ ] Y) i k- D/ S! S
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and 2 ]4 \ Z/ `/ B9 {. g
everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 _. s3 f( i4 v$ k5 {2 J3 V4 ^( a$ [: b( u8 `
Let me just rewrite yours:- N7 |& z6 t$ x
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me
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9 R+ Q* H1 G$ O" \* v5 a1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
8 }) @# x3 x8 `0 u1 I, k2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.
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& g& K9 w6 F7 W) ^' K+ `3 T ]# EThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.# f7 i/ |5 N) s) B, f
9 F, N( p, U: b$ i- {; A2 N& EThink about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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