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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:: l; D! [) x- E, K B
, R6 a% D( u, J3 iit doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
I3 {: ?0 X8 `everyone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. : f2 ~5 W! I* K7 p. ^
% U/ k4 c. T1 _ Y# J' ^5 xLet me just rewrite yours:8 X1 d( a$ E5 z& O6 P
It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me$ E1 E1 a. i/ _2 T( N. @
+ P/ @, I2 Q& c& b% f1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!
; G% ?' c9 K2 E2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.! Y: z7 ] _! a' B2 N% M5 {
) {$ s3 ]8 c) ^# D$ f1 tThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.* ]* @, X! u" Q! b
6 A( r% Q" M7 _# F* s8 p; _Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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