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發表於 2005-6-10 04:33 AM
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Originally posted by 本篤十六世 at 2005-6-10 04:19 AM:
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it doesn't matter,just chat here,I am a very kind gentleman and
( R4 B! j, l, \, Feveryone like me,that's why other moderators are jealous of me. 4 t+ z2 ^; }( g" ]# }9 c0 b4 @
1 w+ x* ^# d7 R+ q0 vLet me just rewrite yours:
, }# `. @3 m) m4 {) j% \It doesn't matter. Please feel free to chat here. I am a very kind person and everyone likes me. That's why other moderators are jealous of me7 N8 G# @7 a/ [* V
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1. Don't use "I" to start the sentence all the time...it gives people a childish image of you. Using "I" also means you're always writing in subjective mood...a 'no-no' for serious academic writing!8 \9 ~1 ]1 K; G4 r- s! n
2. I noticed you've used the works 'like', 'hate', 'popular' and 'kind' a lot. Overusage makes you look dumb...go to theasaurus and get some new words la.* Q* e) i* l7 n3 Q2 r v* t3 N
0 m1 r6 v! Y; p4 w) V+ rThere are lots of smart guys here....some doing their Ph.D.s and others are doctors....if you mellow a bit it would help your popularity to grow.& V! c1 P8 @2 g, B, p0 n
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Think about what I have to say la....I know it hurts when you read it.
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